Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
Welcome back, my very good friend ! Very pleasant surprise. I know your health adventures, I wish no more tests and hassles anymore !
Your last chapter is very well written. You have the gift of finding many different ways to say a word or write a phrase. NOT all writers do this, even in their native language. Unfortunately in every country now, many writers (of any kind of stories, not just writers of erotic stories) follow the convenient: "I know and I speak using 2000-3000 words (maximum) and I write same way". I can't stand this, and I'm glad you're among the writers who are bright exceptions. The vocabulary of your stories is a treasure !
Smart, humorous, witty dialogues, building erotic tension, hot erotic action, friendly but intense erotic confrontations that sometimes reach exaggeration but who is bothered ? In other words, A. Penman in yet another story. Which I hope and wish will not be the last !
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